HammerTime 14
Added 2024-04-10 09:22:12 +0000 UTCNext chapter up, let me know what you think, if there's something I should remove/add or change before releasing.
For whatever reason EPUB doesn't want to work so PDF and DOCX it is.
Comments
Yeah I'll remove it for the regular release, thanks! Sunil is basically the only somewhat straight shooter amongst a group of crazy people, Eileen probably counts too, but she's still holding herself somewhat separate from the inner circle due to her own hangups. Domino as always finds a way to have fun and enjoy everything.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-04-11 00:03:39 +0000 UTCIt hasn't been revealed yet in story, but yes, the mind control is irreversible, but because of Cho's enthusiasm, he only has enough for one person for sure, maybe stretch to two - so he'll get use of it, but won't be able to go around mind controlling everyone. And turning down Cho without making her go all mad cultist is a definite problem, once something has devolved into fanaticism, little things like logic and common sense no longer applies.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-04-11 00:02:23 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always! Is Killgrave mind control irreversible? Because it could very useful to control some powerful people. In addition, Sunil perspective was nice. Also the Cho situation could quite troublesome because fanaticism is double edged sword.
Dr.Flembo
2024-04-10 15:13:00 +0000 UTCGreat chapter as always! The only thing I think you should change is the mention that Tony is going to be back from author's notes. It's a minor spoiler but a spoiler all the same. PDF is definetly superior, please keep it. The Sunil POV is great and it's always nice to see Domino being a menace.
Liima1
2024-04-10 10:12:01 +0000 UTC
