Divine and Conquer 15
Added 2024-03-29 09:35:23 +0000 UTCComments
I'm perfectly fine with you expressing your opinion on my work, I love any review as long as any criticism is constructive, so as long as you don't just say this is shit or something without pointing out what exactly you disagree or feel doesn't work - it's all good. And the stories was Hard Enough a pokemon SI, and Ghost in the city by Seras
JollyHippopotamus
2024-05-17 03:23:03 +0000 UTCOphelia is supposed to be hated, she's not a very good person, at all. And the good guys haven't gotten to shine yet, because their plans are more long term and not so easily seen by Lucas. The story does have a tragedy setting and although I don't hit people over the head with it in the beginning, I constantly hint at how dangerous magic would be if people were competent.
JollyHippopotamus
2024-05-17 03:21:26 +0000 UTCAlso what were the names of those other fics you were reading that made you think your writing was bad. I love new stories and adding more from authors I like to me reading pile is a must. I wish you had a favorite stories list on fanfiction, that's how I usually find new stories to read. I know asking for this might seem like I'm not grateful since I made a review basically rant about my feelings towards the chapter but I had to ask lol. I'm never one for not telling ppl the truth in my reviews
Jordan Lopez
2024-05-17 02:42:33 +0000 UTCI'm sorry but Lucas doing supposedly well, when it fits the schemes of the bad guys like Malfoy. Doesn't count as a win for the good guys in my book at all especially since Lucas is basically on his own side. All I see so so far is an excuse. It seems more to me like it's all Voldemort which considering canon where he ran things anyway. The bad guys are too competent mean while the supposed good guys only give off the airs of competence. I'm all for dark focus but you didn't really give a warning that this would be this fucking dark jeez the levels of shit you did to the weaselys is up there with some of the meanest bashing fics. I'm not saying nerf the bad guys but I am saying you got a lot of ground to cover to saw in any way that the scales are balanced in regards to the other side being more the paper tigers. As for Ophelia, IDC. I'm never going to care for her. All I have right now is a lot of hate right now reading this fic. I'll keep reading hoping to see more then just a one sided beating lol that and I am paying for it so can't just ignore what you're writing for too long or I'll feel like I'm wasting money ๐
Jordan Lopez
2024-05-17 02:26:11 +0000 UTC
