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Divine and Conquer 7

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Tonks and Ophelia has a bit more personal experience of the bad variety of that kind of thing, so they over react easily, especially Ophelia who's a complete bitch most of the time. They have reasons, doesn't make it good or anything, but there's a reason for the madness, Lucas at the same time having a reason for why he's suddenly so meh after fully entering the magical world and having begun practicing some magic. Fucking with your mind on fanon ideas not the best idea.

JollyHippopotamus

It's supposed to be off and jarring, to make you think, hey why is Lucas suddenly acting so meek. Because it has a reason. As for Tonks and Ophelia it introduces the fact not all is right. Because they're obviously fucked up

JollyHippopotamus

Lucas in tonks eyes is a young 11 year old boy she's friends with whom she has made many a sexual joke around. Combine that with him having no knowledge of her history besides her being a girl whose very open and jokey about sexual stuff her and Ophelia's response makes no sense nor Lucas acting like harry as a potential whipping boy

Jordan Lopez

I'm going to say this I hate your oc Ophelia so very very much I haven't hated someone this much in a long while. And tonks co-signing her behavior was really bugging me. And the way you tried to make it seem like Luca deserved how they reacted to him was horrible. Lucas is supposed to be a guy like us who has canon knowledge with lore of fanfics and other stuff. So tonks having guys treat her like possible meat makes no sense when you have made everyone so competent. So the idea that ppl can't just make any girl they get with look better with spells and potions kinda makes tonks a bit obsolete as a target for they type of fanon shenanigans.

Jordan Lopez


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