Thanks for the notes, I was at a con, and put this one out in a hurry.
Krazy Krow
2021-08-14 18:59:15 +0000 UTC
lol, I already wish this was canon. I hope "Yuriverse" is canon, at least.
Queen Wolfen
2021-08-10 06:40:03 +0000 UTC
So Evil Spinner is an eight-legged, six-eyed punker?😂
Duke of J
2021-08-10 01:14:23 +0000 UTC
Some poor curator is going to have a cardiac arrest when he sees the damage here...
Also, nice to see that sexy butts are a multiverse constant with Spinnerette
Lex of Excel
2021-08-09 15:58:01 +0000 UTC
Some issues:
1. In Panel 1, Spinny says "And HAT'S the end of that!"(emphasis mine)
I'm sure you meant "THAT'S the end of that!"
2. In Panel 4, Spinny says "Omigod, it's Jerry's ICE in the Yaoiverse?? That's hilarious!"(Emphasis mine)
I'm sure you meant "Omigod, it's Jerry's ICE CREAM in the Yaoiverse?? That's hilarious!"
Also, why did you go with Mecha Butler? Getting nitpicky here, I know, but I thought Mecha MANSERVANT worked better due to it holding onto the "m/m" gimmick.
Sorry to launch off all gripey. The new story looks interesting.