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SE;ki Chapter 2 REdraw! page 4-8(fixed)

Added 2022-07-22 16:07:41 +0000 UTC

hello :P sorry i haven't posted anything for almost a week ^^; ive been feeling a little bad about my story and art so i decided to fix that haha firstly im rewriting a few upcoming scenes in chapter 13 bc they were bad (will post new storyboards for 10+ patrons soon) then i just had to fix theses pages bc i just cant live with having bad pages in a redraw lol

its not that much different maybe but what i did was:

page 4(first here) i added the beer-can, bc it just came out of nowhere before lol

page5: mostly redrew most of Sato in the first panel so he's not so weird looking :P and fixed a bunch of small things and general arrangement.. it took a few hours tho D:

page6: fixed some small things to make it look better generally..i really disliked that page before but now im fine haha

page7: fixed many small things and some arrangements, also added a panel of Sato :P it needed that panel lol

and page 8: i rearranged the whole damned thing and redid all the inks and tone and all of that D: ah lol... so much better now.. D: i hope..

i hope you all are having a great summer :3

love you 💖 thank you for being patient with me