SE;ki c5 p30 sketch
Added 2017-04-18 14:56:29 +0000 UTCsorry i didn't do any pages last week D: trying to catch up now :P
i might change the dialog a little..it just kinda feels weird..eventho thats kinda the point i maybe did not execute it very well ^^; any suggestions? :P
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he does think its gross, eventho he want to do all the gay stuff ..thats my problem :P it might sound weird but i actually know guys like this irl
rukan kawayama
2017-04-20 06:59:44 +0000 UTCHmm... what about changing the it's gross sentence to something like I don't get that. Unless he really is grossed by it.
Kiyami
2017-04-20 00:03:47 +0000 UTCyeah i know ^^; thats kinda the point tho...he (nor seki) quite understands :P but i feel like i could have executed it better..
rukan kawayama
2017-04-19 11:36:10 +0000 UTCI guess I don't understand how he goes from "it's gross" to "come home with me." Otherwise the wording itself seems fine to me.
Mnemosyne
2017-04-18 22:42:28 +0000 UTC
