Final Edits

Just thought I'd share with y'all (potentially the final) update! I've went through all of the pages of the entire sequence and make a to-do list. Once complete, we should be ready to roll! Stay tuned...

pg 1

. lighting on violet’s shoulder

. wonka card edge

. ‘anything’ needs an exclamation mark

?add veruca?

pg 2

. old collar is still visible

. red tracksuit visible on chest

. increase zipper size

. move violet’s hand to the left

. bright spot on sleeve cuff

. remove bright bottom part of scarlett’s hair

. scarlett’s stomach is missing

. shadow of right side of chest

pg 3

. ?makevViolet look at hand?

. increase brightness of wonka’s speech bubble

pg 4

. veruca’s hair is too purple/pink

. add green highlight to veruca’s hair similar to the others

. show jacket material wrapping around violet instead of having the chest look overlaid

pg 5

. old hip visible behind violet’s right hip

. scarlett’s body should be tilted the other way

. missing comma in 4th speech bubble

pg 6

. remove bright dot beneath violet’s sleeve

?is speech better for violet or scarlett?

. add highlights to violet’s chest

. scarlett’s legs are missing

. add reflective highlight to violet’s right leg

pg 7/8

. shrink watermark

. add chest

. move head up

?add hand holding her chest?

. fix colouring of ball in the background at the top of the page

. remove tiny speck by left of scarlett’s head

. grandpa joe’s hair has no continuity

pg 9/10

?add characters to bottom half?

. floor isn’t consistent

. tracksuit colour isn’t consistent

. stomach too purple

pg 9 

. replace shoes

pg 10

. veruca’s shoulder is on white boarder

. add shoes to violet

. make ‘oh!’ bigger than thought bubble

. veruca’s hair mask on left side

?add movement to scarlet?

. add skin dimples/texture

pg 11

. replace old veruca

. remove dark space above scarlett’s head

. add highlights to violet

. increase brightness of violet’s left hand

. change ‘enough’ to a comment that refers to her height

. zipper is too bright

. tracksuit colour is inconsistent to pg 12

pg 12

. violet’s right hand is clipping her jacket

pg 13

. missing punctuation at the end of 1st speech bubble

. fix hair length/colour to match violet’s

. wonka’s shoulder mask shows bright spot and is jagged

. inconsistent skin colour between pg13 and pg 14

. leftside: light of stomach doesn’t match chest

pg 14

. increase brightness of background lights and steam

. add colour of reflected light to violet