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AMP 57 Early Release: "Memories"

Not sure if that's the title of the chapter, but I'm posting this in a hurry.

This took a lot longer than I anticipated, and a big reason for that is because I wasn't sure how I wanted to handle this. Many of my readers have seen this concept already, in TY. Except, obviously not with OFA. I wasn't sure how I wanted to handle such topics again, and I think I had a good idea.

I'd really like some feedback on this one.

Also, to make up for the wait, this one is pretty damn long. So, enjoy!

Comments

Another long-ass essay. I have a problem...

Rai Brager

First of all, great chapter. We're finally getting full closure to Izuku's past and all his experiences. It's a nice conclusion for his character arc and Kyouka has been nothing but the supportive partner that he's been needing his whole life. Now I just have one question: what's next for the story? We've pretty much entered a new point in the story: Izuku and Kyouka have essentially completed their character arcs from the start of the story, but there's a lot of buildup with Lady Nagant and Shigaraki. So now I'm curious about what's next for AMP. Are there going to be more obstacles and traumatic events that they're going to have to overcome? I'm also hoping for more of class 1-A to be included into the story (besides Bakugo for OBVIOUS reasons, but it'll be nice to see tidbits of character development). It kind of feels like they've been sidelined for a while (maybe that's just me), and I'd love to see them more in the story. Sorry if I sound like I'm complaining, I really love this story and I honestly excited for what happens next. I don't know how much you have planned for the future of the story, but I'm looking forward to it. This is the best MHA fanfic I've ever read and almost none of other ones come close.

Rai Brager

God who chaptered and cried like you have no idea. that idea of kyouka to shed light on Izuku's past was amazing. I hope one day to see a drawing of small kyouka helping small izuku. but god this chapter is an amazing work of art. when I think I can't love Kyouka anymore this comes out. I'm rambling but amazing work 100/10

Pablo Gonzalez


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