AMP 51 Early Release
Added 2024-09-13 15:00:37 +0000 UTCStarting to feel a little sick, so some things might slow down. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the chapter.
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Hm, on my document it is a separate paragraph. I'll see if that changes when I post it
Mizu Tori
2024-09-14 15:31:47 +0000 UTCNo problem! 👍
Rai Brager
2024-09-14 00:17:20 +0000 UTCAnd I've said before, you guys are basically my test audience, so point out flaws all you want
Mizu Tori
2024-09-13 23:55:20 +0000 UTCShit, right That scene with Tomura and Dabi was written a long time ago, so I just copy pasted into the chapter without thinking about those 2 Thanks! I'll fix it before posting tomorrow
Mizu Tori
2024-09-13 23:54:33 +0000 UTCJust a couple nitpicks before this gets released. Twice's clones can last as long as they can so long as they don't receive any damage (most they can take is a broken bone), which seems likely since Lady Nagant is in prison, so they shouldn't have to replace her clone unless she somehow kills herself. Also, Twice and Toga still in the room after Nagant left even though they had gone with her. Not trying to pick out flaws, I just want to let you know ahead of time before you post this. I loved this chapter, and I'll be looking forward to seeing Nagant even more in the future. I still don't know what Shigaraki's main plan is (besides fucking with All Might), but I'll be looking forward to it!
Rai Brager
2024-09-13 23:48:23 +0000 UTCJajajajajaja thanks
Pablo Gonzalez
2024-09-13 18:50:28 +0000 UTCNo problem, unintentional or not! Happy Birthday ^-^
Mizu Tori
2024-09-13 18:48:30 +0000 UTCmizutori tomorrow is my birthday and I couldn't ask for a better gift than a new chapter thanks
Pablo Gonzalez
2024-09-13 18:47:47 +0000 UTCFuck, you know that was pointed out to me already and I forgot to fix it
Mizu Tori
2024-09-13 18:08:17 +0000 UTC“"Thanks!” Tomura smiled, half of her hanging through the portal. She hopped through, followed by Twice, Compress, and Kurogiri." And this is Toga talking, not Tomura
Jamieson
2024-09-13 18:07:19 +0000 UTCNo! No, I swear on everything! I-I keep my passwords in my laptop too, you can check!” “See? Easy. You and your family are gonna be just fine. You’ll wake up tomorrow morning like nothing ever happened. Now, this will sting just a little.” Needs a new paragraph when Shigaraki starts talking
Jamieson
2024-09-13 18:06:20 +0000 UTC"Aizawa collected the papers, sliding them back into his binder, “Thank you, everyone. Problem Children, I’ll see you a few days before the semester starts. UA will be supplying everyone with moving vans, and we’ll want everyone fully moved in before the semester starts." "Semester starts" twice in as many sentences sounds awkward
Jamieson
2024-09-13 15:56:13 +0000 UTC
