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The Book: Chapter 27: Team Rocket blasts off again

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Awwwww i was hoping there would be a visit to professor oak

Holosagewolf

I'm happy with your pacing in the Pokemon world. I feel too many authors make the side trips too long to the detriment of the story

Hadrian512

Cada vez me gusta más esta historia

MerlinO

Now thats what I call a fruitful trip!

crashdash

Legally speaking, stealing from a thief is very much stealing in general, and while there are a few exceptions, part of the idea is that the items should be returned to the original owner if they can be identifies (so stealing a stolen car is still stealing as the VIN and title makes it so it is known who owns it, and the car will be returned to the owner and the person caught in the stolen car shared with theft, with the only possible defense being evidence that they thought they legally purchased the car, and even in that case they don't get to keep it since they didn't purchase the legal title).

Aaron Hardin

Fun chapter, I was half expecting Shaymin and/or Mew/Mewtwo to show up once mc sprouted all those flowers and became psionic, thought Mewtwo might have been curious about who destroyed Team Rocket, granted he might still be with Giovanni. Thanks a lot for the chapter.

Ototsu_Yume

Thanks for the chapter but just a question, who is Tiamat in this story?

DJOK DJOK

Good chapter. But you seam to have given the dratini two different names. The first time you called him shenron and the second time you called him Tiamat. Also you didn’t seam to know which gender the dratini or the larvitar were, flipping back and forth between he and she when referring to either of them.

Shane

Alliance with the Inuzuka clan to raise Arcanine and train them? Inuzuka jutsu but combine with a growlithe

AwkwardArithmancer

Thanks for the chapter

Nazarickk

Should have named that Larvitar Gojira instead.

RoyalTwinFangs

I know you said that rituals are complicated for other people but he seriously should invest into it. Instead of more quick power ups for himself, he should develop more his followers i mean the named ones that are the most powerful. His personal power matters but his elite followers should be close to his level or he will have to take care of most problems and missions in future death worlds.

Jose Matos

Excellent haul from the Pokemon world. With the results of his rituals in the Pokemon world, I'm curious as to where he stands now in his home world and what the meeting between Jiraiya and 'Yorichi' might be like.

Orchamus

It's not stealing if you're stealing from a thief, so in any case, what he did to the Rockets wasn't wrong. Now he just has to take care of all those little ones he brought along. Ha, the ninjas are going to go crazy. And well, Sakumo proves to be just as bad as all ninjas are, nothing I didn't expect, really. Part of me would like to see Kazuya put him in his place. I wonder how he compares to Hashirama in strength right now.

savitar

Konoha is really falling down the idiot tree and hitting every branch on the way down. Sure, just send one of the most famous ninja in the world to the country that just banned ninja.

Adam Daw

Thanks for the chapter!

Jackle The First


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