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Pirating Divinity: Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings

Pirating Divinity

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Chapter: Humble Beginnings

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Comments

I very much do not trust the fat, corrupt ArchBishop being around Lucrezia. Especially since this is a dark hentai setting. 😐

Deathknight134

As usual for you another great story. That said I was hoping what with the title that this would be a One Piece story with like a Miracle Child or Fallen.

Shivrah

Her being a Saintess with Diodora being a thing sounds bad, very bad. Especially when the guy sending them off is definitely a corrupt prick. No one gets as fat as the top church guys without being corrupt as hell. Hopefully he takes a chance to pass on information to Cleria about the king piece and her being killed for it. Doesn't actually have to approach her to do it, just send her a letter that warns her of what's to come. Let her go back to her cousin and get protection there. Will prevent a whole lot of problems for him with having to kill his own mentor, then get sent back to the land of evil pedo priests aka the Vatican.

Kasikan

Why do I have the feeling that bad things are going to happen to Lucrezia...hope she isn't to be on Diodora's list

Orchamus

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

KingSpy25i .

Since he has a more rational mind in the sphere of minimal social sense relationships in the modern world, it is possible that he poses questions rhetorically to certain people in the freer faction of the church, which would be the Orthodox; as he himself said that they barely ate bread, that is ridiculous, and where are the nutrients in simple vegetables or fruits, in addition to nuts? Above all, that ridiculous bias, as if they forget certain passages in the Bible about not discriminating and not treating others as you do not want to be treated.

DerkKill

Well the MC is definitely entertaining though I am curious as to what kind of system he has.

crashdash

Thanks for the chapter

Nazarickk

Great story, you really make it easy to hate the Church. Good Job!

Adam Daw


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