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The Restaurant: Chapter 26: The Comiket- 3

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Chapter 26: The Comiket- 3

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pzf57gjbrT235s8F0PYUv6hi6vYM-f9E4DOcOEP2EqU/edit?tab=t.0

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So I'm aware there's already another chapter and this is a month after the chapter was published but reading until this point I wanted the throw out my opinion. I feel like the family backstory is being teased out a little poorly, the reason being is we're givijg the same information to different people with little to no real progress and it gets frustrating as a reader. Building intrigue is really important for a story but knowing where the line of when to tease and when to move forward is equally important. Overall the story has been great and fun to read so this is only a bump in the road and I'm excited for more.

BurritoBarbarian

Thanks for the chapter

Nazarickk

It’s not just looking like Serafall, it’s also using her most common nickname Sera while looking like her twin. The likelihood of that happening when the other is a well known celebrity is pretty low, but it being a copycat is far more likely not to mention sharing a common ancestor is unlikely when there is only like 5 generations in the Siri bloodline and her only known living sibling (who she totally dotes on) was definitely not the copycat

DaemonSlayer

Honestly feels exhausting to keep getting the sibling meeting pushed back. like everything else becomes less interesting since I keep waiting for that part and anything else is just extra getting in the way. Even if it’s not just extra stuff.

Zerak

I really hope they meet up soon!

SHTC

Finally getting closer to that big reveal, god it's painful at this point, I want the big meet up soon please 🥺

Son-Of-Scorn

We’re almost caught up to all the big plot points the original!

Lictor Magnus

It's weird how they're so hyper fixated on someone looking like Serafall. There are so many people on Earth it's fairly common to see other people who look just like someone else. I grew up going to school with another kid that looked identical to me except for eye color. We likely had a few distant ancestors in common. Which is more or less the case for all people on Earth. So them getting fixated on that seems odd. Especially with the fact Adam and Lilith were created together in that setting. It'd be odder for there to be no one that looks like them. Since they are the Biblical Gods creation through and through whether human or Devil there.

Kasikan

Damn! Ending the chapter at that point! When's the next chapter!? I need more! Please 🥺? Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the chapter! I've been waiting for this for so long haha.

Alu

I was confused a bit with the description of Silas costume as I thought it read that it had a hood.

crashdash

Thank you for the chapter 🙏 "Murphy….thou art a heartless bitch." 🤣🤣 Can wait for the next one but I imagine it'll probably be a few weeks before the next restaurant chap comes out.

KingSpy25i .

That was actually one of my most favorite parts of the old version

KingSpy25i .

More, I need more. It's simply magnificent. Poor Ajuka, the man just wants to be in his laboratory in peace. Is that too much to ask?

savitar

Hell yes, I've been looking forward to this as long as i can remember! Can't wait to see serafall crash out on Lord Sitri but revamped.

Leonhardt Redfield

Excellent chappy, the bit with Serafall meeting Ainz and Rimuru was surprising and the meeting with the Satan's felt more complete with both family's there.

Orchamus


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