Soul Art Online: Chapter 28
Added 2025-03-25 22:05:27 +0000 UTCDisclaimer: I own nothing. All characters in the story are consenting adults over 18 years of age.
Chapter 28: Team Bonding
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something I just noticed, Arthas has a very noticeable distaste for Sleeping bags and is quite happy that there are no sleeping bags in this world. However in the beginning of chapter three there is this comment "While I normally slept in caves or at the top of trees in a sleeping bag, she had somehow ordered a tent from her recent income." I thought it was funny but figured you might want to edit it, or at least have it brought to your attention.
KickAsterisk
2025-04-03 03:52:04 +0000 UTCCould have used the quote. "With a keen eye for details, one truth prevails" Case Closed
Revan009
2025-03-28 03:40:39 +0000 UTCIsn’t Marielle a healer in Akeno’s group already? In chapter 9 she’s dancing around after having gotten the Cleric class from Akeno’s POV. I assume you’re having Akeno get some form of healer class for a future plot point so perhaps edit the chapter to include a different justification for becoming a healer.
KickAsterisk
2025-03-27 23:48:43 +0000 UTCI wish there was more updates for your other stories… I read neither Restaurant nor Soul Art…
alecB
2025-03-26 12:02:58 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Nazarickk
2025-03-26 07:08:08 +0000 UTCBro love this new style of getting the story, I sometime during work have my phone read it so having a way to download it makes my life so much easier
Konoyaro93
2025-03-26 03:06:42 +0000 UTCThank you!
Jose Matos
2025-03-26 01:23:17 +0000 UTCI can't wait for they main characters to all meet each other!
DTShadow
2025-03-26 01:22:48 +0000 UTCThere are four files in the attachments. Just download any of them for the chapter.
Mihir Jha
2025-03-26 01:19:12 +0000 UTCI like the doc file format, thanks for posting it
Crash
2025-03-26 01:17:38 +0000 UTCI don't see the document, only the chapter title :(
Valentin Reyes
2025-03-26 01:06:05 +0000 UTCIt's already up there as a doc file. Check the 4th attachment. I have added pdf, epub, mobi and docx
Mihir Jha
2025-03-26 01:05:30 +0000 UTCCan the OP add the another format for the document? Preferably googledocs or microsoftword. Please??
Jose Matos
2025-03-26 00:59:45 +0000 UTCDone.
Mihir Jha
2025-03-26 00:07:08 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, the discussion with Kuroka made a lot of sense. I mean, it was very obvious she was faking it. And if Arthas, being as young as she is, noticed it, then surely Venelana saw it and everything. While I liked the character chapters, I admit I'd like to see the next world quest. And I think Akeno would have to be a great mage. I mean, I understand she wants to be a healer, but I'd like to see her full future potential as a mage. I wonder what face the Golden Dawn people will make when they see Elaine is too much for any of them. It serves those pieces of trash well.
savitar
2025-03-25 22:49:38 +0000 UTCGot it. Will do so from now on.
Mihir Jha
2025-03-25 22:28:12 +0000 UTCIf you want to publish chapters in files, please consider to use other formats then pdf. I am reading usually from my phone and it's much better to use one of the formats for reading apps(EPIB, MOBI, FB2, etc.).
Anton Peliukh
2025-03-25 22:19:32 +0000 UTCPlease join our discord server. It will help us a lot.
Mihir Jha
2025-03-25 22:17:50 +0000 UTCYes
Mihir Jha
2025-03-25 22:15:32 +0000 UTCA ok, so... the other chapter its going to be uploaded in this form also?
Dartx King
2025-03-25 22:10:04 +0000 UTCAlso if you uploaded the file for the comiket part 2? Because I got the notification but I can't access the chapter
Dartx King
2025-03-25 22:08:47 +0000 UTCSo I have to download this? Is this gonna be what happens in the future, cause I'm not a fan
Son-Of-Scorn
2025-03-25 22:08:04 +0000 UTCJust the file?
Dartx King
2025-03-25 22:07:17 +0000 UTC
