Family Ties (Story Board Page 13)
Added 2017-12-05 16:56:27 +0000 UTCThe story slows slightly as bieesha is left alone is the house by himself for the first time since he arrived. We follow his trail now >:3
A new Story board image for the comic!
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Dialogue:
3.
Elizabeth: Bieesha darling Im going out.....shopping... and your Dad is out with his work friends drinking so youl be on your own for a while, dont stay up too late and make sure to clean the dishes before you go to bed okay dear?
Bieesha: Kay...
4:
Ezliabeth: Love you baby!
Comments
Yer its fine id spell correct for the final version xD
Bram Whitford
2017-12-05 18:07:12 +0000 UTCYou misspelled "you'll"
Buzzling
2017-12-05 17:11:26 +0000 UTC
