kyellgold

kyellgold

Love Match part 10

Added 2015-01-28 17:19:08 +0000 UTC

A short conversation with Rocky's sister, and some revelations.

Comments

This is what you get with a first draft. :D I will go back and standardize at some point.

Kyell Gold

2015-01-28 23:25:43 +0000 UTC

Good job on this one... though I think it might be wise to put a nail in the place where the story is happening. It's confusing for me because I live in Florida, an hour away from Pensacola... And so far the state has gone from (The State of) Pensacola, to Florida, to Pensaco... and the city name is grey as well... on a side note, and this only effects me in particular, I used to work a tennis resort down the road called Tops'l Beach and Racquet.... I was the main club desk attendant when I was 18 and responsible for organizing matches between pro's and guests... So every time they are at school playing I picture them on Clay Court Three. XD

2015-01-28 22:00:45 +0000 UTC

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