As you can see I changed a couple of things here! For one, I altered the coach's dialogue slightly. This didn't feel very natural to me upon re-reading it later, so I split the dialogue up and re-wrote it to something I felt was better!
Secondly, I changed Nestle's pose. I thought it would be a REALLY bad idea for Nes to have his back to his opponent. It would make people wonder why the panther wouldn't just finish him off - rightfully so. So I turned Nes around to be in a more defensive position.