Sword Instructor: Innocent
Added 2016-12-27 19:16:52 +0000 UTC"Are you ok? Blood started shooting out of your nose and you passed out?"
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Jes and I are debating doing a (nip slip) version of this. Do you think it should only be in the blade's reflection for that momment in Training, so she has recovered by the time you come to, or should it be exposed in this scene as well?
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Comments
I think Hawk makes a good point. The Instructor would of had to of adjusted herself and I feel like she wouldn't be that clueless about his nosebleed if she was aware of the slip. If you wanted to add the nip slip as well as not take attention away from her face then a solution could be a simple close up followed by a pan out. Several other visual novels do this to direct vision and help immerse viewers in the roll of the protagonist. For the scene you could have the view of the Apprentice focused in initially on her face, then once he realizes what happened have a quick pan down to her nip followed by a sudden pan out to the full image. Insert some surprise screen effects/dialog and I think it'd definitely add to the scene. :D
GlassTrinity
2016-12-29 05:59:47 +0000 UTCSince it's a close up I was trying to show more details of her face. So yes, eye shadow and painting is intentional, but the fact you have to ask means I sucked at painting it XD Thanks for the feedback though!
AGL games
2016-12-27 22:08:37 +0000 UTCi always thought she should have her nip still slipped in that scene, or she would have known the 'source' of the sudden blood but thats really up to you i am more interested in the rather sudden transition between face and nose and the greyish eyeshadow. intentional?
Michael Hawk
2016-12-27 21:31:39 +0000 UTC
