New sneak preview - your input is appreciated
Added 2020-09-10 18:05:10 +0000 UTCNew video is in the final draft stage. I'd love to get your thoughts if you don't mind seeing the video before it's polished. There are a couple things in animation that I want to tweak but let me know whatever you spot that could be better. I would also like to get your thoughts in title/thumbnail combos because I don't feel like I have the right one yet.
Thank you for taking the time to offer suggestions!
Derek
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g5t3ib13091ilzx/Kodak.mov?dl=0
Comments
Suggested title: The fallout in our bones? I think a corresponding thumbnail could be a picture of the US map. I think there are bits of the video where you can add a couple more lines to explain how some isotopes emit alpha while others emit beta. The biological parts are pretty well narrated for the general public. A final question would be: Do you want to go into any more detail about how the propaganda actively obfuscated the overall low average versus local concentration? The ecosystem is extremely efficient at concentrating essential nutrients.
Poker Chen
2020-09-14 09:03:15 +0000 UTC