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Operative - chapter 02 re-write

I've updated chapter 2 to save Thea's heels.

In actuality, I didn't like removing the contents of Thea's ring so soon after revealing how much money was inside it. It felt like a bit of a reverse deus ex machina--a diabolus ex machina, if you will--despite it not originally being intended that way.

I also wanted to preserve the chapter release order, so I just edited the post directly instead of re-uploading it.

You can find the updated chapter here.

If you're seeing this and you started reading through Operative AFTER March, 28th, 2023, then you can ignore this post. It was actually just a prank, and you can safely go back to reading with the knowledge that I always get everything perfectly right on the first draft.


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