CassiopeiaQuinn

Page Commentary No. 99

Added 2018-08-18 06:14:04 +0000 UTC

Gunwild: Undervalued character design: Security robot with a truncheon in the background of the first panel.

Psu: Undervalued design, the friggen Fortunato Security Dropship that Madison's crew have borrowed. It's big force cushioning thrusters don't read perfectly in black and white but I think it looks enough like a space ship to work for us. My main mistake is that the casino chip design on the nose is using the wrong glyph for "F" which is to stand for the city name, Fortunato.

Gunwild: When you made a point of adding the two Doll-Fins watching with interest through the aquarium window I knew I wanted to write about what they were thinking. And I did! But that's a commentary for a few more pages from now.

Psu: This is just another one of those pages with a really lively world all around it, and it constantly expands everything about the comic. Everything from Theira's expanding mandibles to the various posters and bridges in the background, this issue is unique in our comic in just how many characters show up in the background.

Gunwild: Definitely a lotta work. But it's such good comic cinematography, where you can put in a lot of characters and not have to focus on just one or two. So everybody gets something to read in their expression.

Psu: We went through a lot of writing on this page didn't we? I think at first glance it's a repeat of Madison at the end of the first comic, but it's not quite the same at all really. Now that they've been through a couple adversarial adventures, Madison here is showing a much calmer anger.

Gunwild: She's just mad because the Doll-Fins shows are cancelled.