Page Commentary No. 92
Added 2018-07-07 23:31:11 +0000 UTCGunwild: We're kinda lucky that head injury wasn't worse for Maddy!
Psu: There were a LOT of people really mad at Lefyne for this one. But to be sure I don’t think he meant for her to fall off. He just wasn’t thinking of that as a possible consequence.
Gunwild: Lots of narcissists don't think much about how their actions can harm others...
Psu: Like Cassiopeia!
Gunwild: Well, most people don't get into the outlaw life with helping others as their main goal, Robin Hood aside...
Psu: I saw the Russel Crowe movie. He didn’t know WHAT he was getting into as an Outlaw. Or what that movie was about... anyway, This is a really fun and dynamic page. But I gotta note the three sound effects here. I usually avoid using sound affects if possible, but for the complicated things going on it was the most efficient way to explain what happened. While still giving me enough space to make the sequence visually exciting. I’d love to see this whole chapter in color some day.
Gunwild: Casinos are interesting to look at, and have lots of colors! I do think there's a lot of good detail on this page even witch the level of done-ness that's there. I like Lefyne catching the stick thingee in panel one, although if the sound effect were larger or in color it'd be easier to notice.
Psu: The two tone shading here works in our favor, making things a lot clearer than they otherwise might be by giving us an easy to see silhouette. Still, I gotta say even without Lefyne it was certainly presumptive of Maddy to assume she’d won when she’s still outnumbered on a crashing cat shuttle! Maybe she shouldn’t have jinxed it...
Gunwild: That's the real lesson of this whole series. "When things are going well, shut up, or you'll jinx it."
