Enjoy Your Stay (WIP, 9 pages)
Added 2021-02-23 21:45:58 +0000 UTCI've been working on this for a while and finally finished these rough pages! Thumbnailing/roughing is always the most challenging part of making a comic for me ;;;
This is for the Fantastic Frights horror anthology! I'm not sure if I'm totally happy with the pacing of this. I think it ends a bit too suddenly but I hit my page limit so this is where I landed for now. I'll see what the editors think haha :3
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Aw thank you!! I'm still thinking of ways to tweak it hehe, I can't wait to actually get around to inking it ;D I'm going to have so much fun
2021-02-24 23:04:28 +0000 UTCAw thanks Vee!! I did think about that, I'm gonna ask the editors about it *but* something I failed to mention earlier is that this is a kids' anthology so it can't be too scary. I think officially they said implied death is fine but it can't be like, too horrific? I'll have to ask them about it but yeah what you suggested would be a good solution!
2021-02-24 23:04:04 +0000 UTCit looks VERY cool indeed! I will be excited to see if you are able to work on it a little more in the future :O
Sandwich247
2021-02-23 23:13:10 +0000 UTCOoh, maybe if you're worried about how it ends, you could play around with if the protag didn't escape, and instead got caught after pausing to look at the horror of room full of corpses? Either way, super cool!! I can't wait to see this polished c:
kannter
2021-02-23 22:08:32 +0000 UTC
