Jalter Doujin Page 29 (last one)
Added 2019-02-07 04:58:59 +0000 UTCLASTO PAGOOOOOO
Not sure about the exact dialogue i should put here, but let's call it a END OF THIS DOUJIN YAAAAY~
Now i have to fix some dialogues (still) and gramatically correct it. While the grammar is correcting by someone else, i'll work on the patreon sketches (3-4 days) and the coverpage (1day)! With these informations you'll be probably be able to understand when the doujin will be launched online. Thanks for your support during these months of this projects, luv u all
Btw, if some of you want to give me their point of view on the doujin, or want to add some "better text" (not a gramatically changement, but if you think your dialogues/thoughts ideas works better, feel free to suggest it ~)
Comments
I read the whole doujin and it was good! It clearly shows that you are very good on gaze, but they are some things that I don’t really like too, but I guess it’s probably because of my point of view, I’m way to tired to make a list but I’ll do it later for sure
Yuki Hayato
2019-02-10 23:32:55 +0000 UTCCongratulations!
Excella
2019-02-07 21:39:32 +0000 UTCA doujin takes a long time i see , well done
jacklt13
2019-02-07 08:39:20 +0000 UTC
