Character standings round two
Added 2022-12-04 23:44:00 +0000 UTCPrevious chapter: https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-attire-for-75316069?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_creator&utm_content=join_link
Alice
Progress: 2/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'6
Hair: Short black bobcut
Body type: Fit
Breasts: Generous bust (Double D-cup)
Personality traits: Energetic, Social, Cheerful, Extroverted ---> Lethargic, antisocial, pessimistic, Introverted, gloomy, spiteful
Sexuality: Straight
Gretchen
Progress: 6/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'9
Hair: Long red flowing
Body type: Skinny
Breasts: Medium breasts (C-cup)
Personality traits: Drawn back, relaxed, competitive ---> Commanding, confident, extremely competetive
Eyesight: Bad ---> Perfect 20/20 vision
Sexuality: Straight
Rebecca
Progress: 9/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'2
Hair: Long brown loose
Body type: Fit
Breasts: Ample breasts (D-Cup)
Personality traits: Grounded, Polite, Hard working, Self sufficient, independent, kind
Skin: Pale ---> Tan
Sexuality: Straight
Clothes: School uniform with skirt and jacket ---> Denim mini shorts, Sandals, Red sports bra, Dark blue hoodie
Himari
Progress: 6/40
Extra perks: 2
Race: Asian
Age: 18
Height: 5'0
Hair: Medium black ---> Long pink
Body type: Petite
Breasts: Flat chest (A-Cup)
Personality traits: Innocent, Naive, Kind, Forgiving, Sexually and socially inexperienced
Fetishes: None ---> Corruption and moral degeneration (Unaware)
Sexuality: Straight ---> Bisexual
Libido: High
Comments
Actually now that i think about it loathing/loathful might be the right word for it.
Grif end
2022-12-05 14:40:46 +0000 UTCI think there's a miscommunication here what i mean to say is that "Anger" (A.K.A.:is an intense emotional state involving a strong uncomfortable and non-cooperative response to a perceived provocation, hurt or threat. ) does not feel like what you have described about Alice so far and Irritable or hating seems to fit more to what you have described so far
Grif end
2022-12-05 14:39:34 +0000 UTCIrritable is absolutely a trait I should've considered. I'm reluctant to go and change it in retrospect now though, I'll definitely use it the next time I describe a similar character though! Thank you.
Felixfalck
2022-12-05 13:37:13 +0000 UTCAlso if i may Suggest changing angry to irritable instead.
Grif end
2022-12-05 11:48:22 +0000 UTCJust ran it through google translate and spiteful didn't mean exactly what I thought it did, you're right. Will correct shortly
Felixfalck
2022-12-05 11:03:56 +0000 UTCAbout Alice, i get the spiteful but isn't angry/anger a different thing ?
Grif end
2022-12-05 07:22:05 +0000 UTC
