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Added 2017-09-22 00:17:39 +0000 UTCHi guys! here is something I always wanted to do,is like a comic,but you make the dialogues.
I would like to see what you come up with :3
Also I hope you like it ^^
Next thing is a reward :3,Ill try to finish it by this weekend.Sorry for being slow lately,Im trying to gain some speed again ^^.
love u guys <3.
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Will the next page be influenced by our responses or do you have a story planned out already? *Cracks Knuckles* okay, dialogue then. 1) Girl: This place gives me the creeps... 2) Off-panel:You're telling me...hey where'd that partner of yours go? 3) Girl: Oh him? He had to STEP out for a moment... 4) Off-panel: In the middle of all this? Man, that guy sure is unreliable... 5) Girl: Maybe, at least it keeps us *giggles* on our TOES... 6) ....*cough* The puns....*cough......so bad....
SonicJohnbh
2017-09-23 08:24:28 +0000 UTCHave to say. This one is actually pretty good.
MatoKabane
2017-09-22 17:50:35 +0000 UTC1) Have you seen our new star? 2) Nope. Haven't 'seen' him today. 3) But what would a 'lowly assistant' know about a 'star'. 4) He still needs to learn his lines. 5) If I see him, I will be sure to 'break him in'. 6) I already said I'm sorry.
MatoKabane
2017-09-22 17:49:41 +0000 UTCThis actually looks pretty neat. Though you would have to provide some backstory, such as setting and what some of the characters are supposed to be to get better dialogues (At least from me). As for what I would think the dialogue is so far: (Panel 1) Girl: You need something? and Unknown: Yeah, where's our fighter?; (Panel 2) They said they had something to take care of; (Panel 3) Girl: I am sure they will come back really soon; Unknown: Ugh, great. Now we have to wait a few hours for them; Fighter: Damn it. Let me out!
Nodrog
2017-09-22 17:05:24 +0000 UTC
