Alien Abduction Chapter 2 (1/3)
Added 2024-10-19 07:42:00 +0000 UTC(Updated) Added 8 new pages to this part.
I feel like I've gotten slower...
I wonder if the dialogues are natural. Looking over it so many times makes me unsure. Also, I wasn't too sure about what makeover I could give Hitomi, so the result seem kinda simple(?)
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Sorry everyone for such a long delay. Too many traveling, moving and life events have kept me busy this month making it difficult to sit down and draw.
I decided to skip my usual pencil sketching process and go straight into the inking line seeing as my sketch was already very clean enough. I think this should save time in the future as I won't need to draw the same thing twice albeit the line might be a little rougher.
I intended for this first part to be about 22 pages long but ran out of time so I could only post 14 pages. I'll update this post again when the rest of the pages are done, I'm so sorry once again.
It feels like the entirety of Alien Abduction 2 is getting a remake, but I want to try to reuse at least some of the sex scenes in the old version.
In this part, I wanted to show what happened before Hitomi went out shopping, and what she did at home after the Abduction. What do you all think of this new start to the chapter?
I would love to hear your thoughts please let me know in the comments or on the Discord server. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
Comments
I came back at the right time then
Unknown
2024-10-29 08:56:40 +0000 UTCI believe that the school uniforms are extremely attractive. And maybe you can have more skirts and tight shirts.
mefihs
2024-10-27 15:05:16 +0000 UTCI love the series! I’m a writer so if you ever need someone to review the dialogue or just bounce ideas off of I’d be happy to help!
Tatted11
2024-10-22 20:28:25 +0000 UTCI like the dialogue, the only reason it may feel unnatural is because Hitomi is a “fish out of water”. The only thing I find weird about the makeover is how similar Hitomi and Aki hair look after there makeovers from Eriko. I know the hair will look different after color but maybe that’s why the makeover feels odd.
Omega1918
2024-10-20 10:37:12 +0000 UTCsoo good we support you and want more obviusly
gerard
2024-10-20 09:34:40 +0000 UTCEvery time I see AB, I want to see more...
Bluemoon_445
2024-10-20 06:18:50 +0000 UTCI love the interaction between the three of them you get a sense of a close friendship that hitome has no idea about and how to properly act
Todd Crim
2024-10-19 23:48:52 +0000 UTCSato is going to love her new look! Really looking forward to hitome being forced to do more girly things and becoming more submissive
George
2024-10-19 19:14:33 +0000 UTCCan't wait for it to be coloured this is the series that got me to join your patreon
Kian Stephenson-Beckett
2024-10-19 18:23:19 +0000 UTCYour art has gotten so good! It was great before and it is better now! I hope you feel proud as well, it’s fantastic!
ルナシバ
2024-10-19 18:11:56 +0000 UTCThis is the best gender bender series I have ever seen
George
2024-10-11 00:12:34 +0000 UTCSo far I like the added scenes, and I’m looking forward to what comes next. I am interested if you plan on adding any scenes between hitome and sato when they are at the beach. Some of my favorite scenes from part 3 are then at the gym before the sex starts
Omega1918
2024-10-10 00:44:54 +0000 UTCYes, just for a little while until I can get back to it, considering how many pages it has, it’s a little intimidating to work on.
Arisa
2024-10-06 14:55:46 +0000 UTCThe aliens are actually pretty nice, by giving her womens clothes When they turn me into a girl, hopefully they will also give me some nice dresses =)
Zanbato
2024-10-03 12:02:46 +0000 UTCGreat job as always. I love how you’re fleshing out the character so much. I can’t wait to see her character grow from a spoiled rich kid.
Todd Crim
2024-10-01 05:47:56 +0000 UTCLove this! Is coloring for popularity 2 taking a backseat though?
John J.
2024-10-01 01:27:16 +0000 UTCI really appreciate the new pacing! It helps the story flow better, and I’ve become more invested in the characters and their backstories. I look forward to learning more about Sato and Hitomi/Hideki’s past relationship!
MomoCat
2024-09-29 03:55:43 +0000 UTCNice, honestly I do look forward to how you expand on Yuuko and Hina in this version of events
MangamanZX Call me Zed
2024-09-28 13:59:55 +0000 UTCLove the additional character development as it makes you more invested in the characters.
kendo44
2024-09-28 12:03:08 +0000 UTCTurned out good
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-09-28 09:10:35 +0000 UTCLove your remake, more pleaseeeee 😭❤️
Bluemoon_445
2024-09-28 08:12:55 +0000 UTCYESSSSS MORE OF MY FAVOURITE SERIES
Kian Stephenson-Beckett
2024-09-28 07:52:35 +0000 UTC
