Alien Abduction Chapter 1 (3/3)
Added 2024-07-13 09:14:07 +0000 UTCThank you for your patience! Here's part 3/3. A new scene was added to the aftermath of the original 1st chapter of Alien Abduction to show how the characters got home after being released by the Aliens.
Do the characters feel a bit more developed yet?
I would love to hear your thoughts please let me know in the comments or on the Discord server. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
Comments
Honestly, sex scenes are nice, but I've always felt that the exploration of one's new self and identity, feelings, etc after a transformation are by far the best parts of a TG/TF story! This 1/3rd of the story was definitely my fave.
Val Salia
2024-07-18 23:06:04 +0000 UTCIf those Aliens can really change anything around me, then ill gladly let them turn me into a girl. 🙃😊
Zanbato
2024-07-18 15:41:30 +0000 UTCYes, I usually do that on Dropbox. On here I just put all the pages of each part together in the same post.
Arisa
2024-07-13 20:31:46 +0000 UTCYour art is just so incredible, and I have really fallen for the characters so I am loving giving them more depth. I do have a question. Will the comic all be bundled into one file once it is fully completed?
Mon Coeur
2024-07-13 17:06:05 +0000 UTCThis is a great addition to the collection I can’t wait for the continuation
Todd Crim
2024-07-13 15:10:23 +0000 UTCI love the balance you have between sections that explore TSF specific themes, and sex scenes that are super hot. What I like most about Hitomi is the swing between trying to retain her identity as a man and then everything in her new life reinforcing that she is super feminine. As far as criticism I have almost none. Your characters run the spectrum of transformation styles and levels of mental changes so there is always something different each time you start a new story. Keep doing what you’re doing it’s always great stuff.
Omega1918
2024-07-13 14:23:43 +0000 UTCGoof job love the new ch
Rat matt
2024-07-13 14:03:18 +0000 UTCOh I see, hope you two stay healthy, always looking forward to all the stories ❤️
Bluemoon_445
2024-07-13 12:49:37 +0000 UTCWhich one will be colored next?
Jesse Nell
2024-07-13 12:33:16 +0000 UTCGreat work! The additional backstory really helps give depth to the motivations and mental changes. Makes you much more invested in the characters.
kendo44
2024-07-13 12:27:04 +0000 UTCI don't know. We still have so many things that need to be colored.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-07-13 11:16:25 +0000 UTCWow, niceee, that sounds amazing 🥰 I can't wait to see the new version 🔥 And does it mean that from now until the end of the year there will be more development around AA? 🫶
Bluemoon_445
2024-07-13 11:10:54 +0000 UTCmore! more!! more!!!
Yue See1e
2024-07-13 11:02:56 +0000 UTCWe'll be doing a big remake of part 2 as well and probably a much more minor update to 3 and then can finally move forward! :') There are also some more point issues as well ;)
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-07-13 10:54:31 +0000 UTCTo me, characters development isn't just a bit, it's a lot 😁 Through this new scene we understand how Hitomi's life has changed. And that makes the story more attractive and engaging ❤️ I really enjoyed seeing chapter 1 in this perfect version and also curious when will we see part 4? ☺️
Bluemoon_445
2024-07-13 10:50:54 +0000 UTCThose are just normal typoes that get fixed usually a day or two after release. And actually what you're saying is wrong. It should be "but why did the aliens bother sending everyone a text?" I am a native english speaker and usually there are a few corrections made after it comes out. I only notice later, because it can be hard to notice things when you're working on so many pages all at once. There is already a list of tweaks in our discord chat that just haven't been pushed through since arisane is in bed.
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-07-13 10:15:59 +0000 UTCLots of word - endings are missing. Like, the words in general are correct, but they're not all written out correctly. For example "But why the alien bother sending everyone a text" - > "but why do the aliens bother sending everyone a text" Little things, not big mistakes. Stuff that a native speaker would point out.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2024-07-13 10:05:47 +0000 UTCCan you explain how its not that good english?
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-07-13 09:49:59 +0000 UTCLike always very good art and really not that good English.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2024-07-13 09:46:48 +0000 UTCNice
Arisane (Twicetale)
2024-07-13 09:32:20 +0000 UTC
