Masaki The Devourer II - Page 114
Added 2024-01-30 13:58:21 +0000 UTCOkay guys. This is the second draft of the dialogue. I redid it AGAIN this morning. There are some changes I have to make for sure. but please read over it and tell me what you think of it. I am trying to tweak a few things for the upcoming Norah backstory.
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I'll go to the store and get some more snacks... I'll go to buy cigarettes Nina's version
Alice Alban
2024-04-01 14:45:06 +0000 UTCI really like the idea of this family unit. Hopefully Norah and Grandma F make up and learn to not blame themselves
GagaLadyLover
2024-01-31 03:24:03 +0000 UTCOh boy, those are some quality genes
Volcom25
2024-01-31 03:23:59 +0000 UTCNorah has had a rough life. She was so happy when she was little. Just like all of us. Before the realization of real life slaps us in the face
GagaLadyLover
2024-01-31 03:22:23 +0000 UTCGood family genetics. Grandma Fitzkowski used to be stacked too back in the day.
GagaLadyLover
2024-01-31 03:20:42 +0000 UTCNorahβs grandma is the ultimate final boss, she really stuffed Masaki, Masaki is so big π€€ and a flashback about Norah too. She is so cute π₯° and her mom is hot, itβs easy to see where Norah gets her looks from
Volcom25
2024-01-31 01:13:43 +0000 UTCAlso little bit of Norah backstory will be interesting to see.
Goldent5
2024-01-31 00:13:08 +0000 UTCGeez Masaki is totally stuffed to the brim. Love her feets there. Mrs. F shouldn't feel like that, it is unfortunate to loss love one's but never have self doubts about yourself because it isn't your fault. Self loathing is negative either way. Should be proud what you have now and today. Just make the most of it.
Goldent5
2024-01-31 00:12:21 +0000 UTCOkay, Mrs. F's feast marathon needs an interlude so all the foods in Masaki's overstuffed belly could go to her body's southern region. Let's see some black flash, again, this time about Norah. Poor girl, her father left and her mom died and she blame herself for it. She should have been visiting a therapist instead of drowns her feelings in food. It's not healthy neither your soul and your cholesterol.
M4773n
2024-01-30 18:42:08 +0000 UTCGetting major death flags here.
UltraSpinkie
2024-01-30 14:56:53 +0000 UTC
