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RAIL V1 page 3 WIP

Now, where were we? :3

After taking a short hiatus between books, this feels like I'm working on the first episode of a new season of a show LOL the break was extremely good for me though, and I hope it shows as new pages come out ❤️

RAIL V1 page 3 WIP

Comments

I love a good spin-off series!

Daftnewt

Same.

Ernesto Romero

I hope you're right.

dipstik subaru

I don’t think it goes that far. I think she’s being stupid. And hypocritical. But I don’t think Chelsea would ever be vindictive. Or petty enough to want to actively hurt Coop.

Ernesto Romero

It's almost like she is planning to use this as payback for Coop for having feelings for Dee while they were still dating. Which is just vindictive, he was struggling with his sexuality and you lost it on him for harmlessly exploring it.

dipstik subaru

Only time will tell. To be honest, though, Chelsea makes me raise an eyebrow too. She still decided to keep the secret that River outed Coop being with Andy without his consent. (I know they did it to protect Coop’s feelings, but it still feels out of line. And makes me consider possible repercussions for that in the future.) And she denied seeing Coop in the Rail promos when she’s the one who lead him to take a job there in the first place. (And hasn’t told Andy that yet…)

Ernesto Romero

And she had to calm him down during Coop's birthday. I think he's trying though, especially after their talk.

dipstik subaru

Hmm. About that…I imagined once that, when we get to learn about Fletcher’s character and situation in full, it’s gonna turn out he’s actually alone. Buff, wealthy, and a celebrity…but alone. In contrast to the arrogant and condescending asshole he’s been shown as thus far. We already know he’s way more of a goof than he lets on. Who knows?

Ernesto Romero

Can only imagine how fast such an edition would be sold out ^^

Hikaru Ginno

i want fletcher to put emery in some daddy apparel sooooo bad. also on a less horny front i wonder if Fletcher has a good reason for his ambition and abrasive nature and we get to see that with his managing the club.

jellybones

I can already see some priceless expressions. :D

Red Laurent

Definitely excited recently bought and reading the whole series and ready for new content.

Patrick Nielsen

Sweet! Can’t wait to see their reactions to the club!

Dustin Money

Hey, I’m in a similar boat. I got a lot of thoughts on my mind about this story too. Personally, for me, besides the stuff regarding Cooper and Andy’s envy streak, it keeps feeling like when Andy sees his own flaws, he just ignores or shrugs them off without trying to change or try something different. Not to mention how no one really calls out Andy on his flaws. It took till the end of the first story arc for Chelsea to call out Andy on his impulsiveness. I feel like the big moments of musing and self-reflection have been, between Andy and Coop, reserved for just Coop, since he’s been changing and Andy’s stayed largely the same.

Ernesto Romero

Thanks. Most usually can't stand my rambling lol. I'm new to all this so I'm not sure of all the rules yet

dipstik subaru

You’re fine. You said a lot of what I’m feeling about Coop and Andy, actually. I agree with your analysis.

Ernesto Romero

Nudist Cut coming this fall. Lmao.

Damie♥

Jokes On Them, I Wanna Rail Them All

Atari Doge

I have a tendency to ramble and overthink shit though, sorry.

dipstik subaru

Their bullshit? Yeah, Coop has slowly accepted who and what he is. Dee has been great by recognizing he is denying it, and helps him find his true self without going so fast as to scare him. He gradually tried things to find his limit and respected it each time it was found. Cared for him when he was down and out, talked it out when he realized he had to move out to benefit their potential relationship. Dee does have a rather large jealous streak he needs to work on though and I worry that might come to the forefront very shortly. Which is odd because he's been banging his boss for how long now, and Coop hasn't really made it an issue. When Coop fools around with River though, Dee takes it personally.

dipstik subaru

So excited!

Chris

I hope Emery and Noah get more of a role, I can not stop looking at them including the rest

Max Freeman

And so it begins. 3 people I don’t like about to enter the chaos. And Noah’s by their side. I’m waiting to see how this story elaborates on Noah and Fletcher’s dynamic. I feel they’d come off as frenemies in a way, just in a darker way than Coop and Andy were in the past.

Ernesto Romero

Same. I’m personally waiting for all their bullshit to be exposed so they can all get a major reality check. Coop’s been growing and changing all this time - I’m waiting for the rest. And for Coop to show he’s evolved.

Ernesto Romero

Yeah, I usually draw their bodies first and THEN add the clothing in the final sketch before linework!

Jackaloo

Oh I hope for Coop's sake the group, especially Dee, are accepting once they figure out it's him. He already has such a small amount of self esteem, if they don't accept him it will crush him

dipstik subaru

OK, hang on. Here I thought our (g)oldies are walking around shirtless. But guess that is only for proportions, right?

Hikaru Ginno

First page, last page, or somewhere in-between. Every page feels like it's the first show of a new season to us! ❤️❤️❤️

Taimaishoo

I can't wait! :)

Bossdog

CAN'T WAIT!

Steven


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