Summers Gone - page 24
Added 2017-05-10 00:54:43 +0000 UTCThis page took me a little longer because I had to really think about Coop's response and make sure it matched his speech pattern and intelligence.
Comments
Bah! Thank you. It's happened before; when I go to do spell check, it misses words that are spelled correctly in another definition. I'll change it when I am home!
Jackaloo
2017-05-11 20:57:45 +0000 UTCSorry, um, is that a typo in the first panel? He says "were love is devoid" instead of "where love is devoid". If it were real world dialogue it would be chalked up to simple slip of the tongue, but... written words... and all that razzamataz.
Nathan
2017-05-11 07:02:05 +0000 UTCExtra time well spent. Everything about this page is excellent.
RadjinWolf
2017-05-10 23:49:33 +0000 UTCExactly job, very realistic indeed
Tenyo
2017-05-10 04:21:12 +0000 UTCDeep man deep
Vaska
2017-05-10 01:50:29 +0000 UTCPretty superb work on that speech Jackaloo. I can see where the dots are being connected with his home life too. Nice work!
Tiller Brown
2017-05-10 01:38:07 +0000 UTChe's building our hope! so he can disappoint us! total allusion right here.
Czyrek-Marc
2017-05-10 01:21:44 +0000 UTCAlso great job on placement of the pauses and uhh during his speech! It is very realistic of a BS speech made up on the spot
Coltyn91
2017-05-10 01:13:03 +0000 UTCI can believe the dialogue comes from Coop, great job there Jackaloo! It is refreshing to finally get some insight to what Coop is thinking especially in the realm of love and disappointment. It is quite interesting the second example he uses is the one from his own personal life, I assume. It really gives some insight to the kind of relationship he has with his father and his perception of his father and relationship. Kudos Jackaloo, I love when you update but especially this side comic :3 though the main comic is getting pretty steamy
Coltyn91
2017-05-10 01:10:35 +0000 UTCId pay that answer!
2017-05-10 01:09:25 +0000 UTCHe just gets cuter and cuter with each page... #totallydonthaveacrushonhim...
MeekoWolf
2017-05-10 01:07:09 +0000 UTC
