Smokey

Runaway In Stepford: Chapter 2

Added 2025-02-12 10:00:02 +0000 UTC

Hope everyone is ready, because it's time to meet Dad!

I wanted to thank some friends from discord who gave some feedback on the first two chapters of this. Aubree and Jamie, you both gave some very useful feedback and I appreciate it a lot!

Molly is a prickly little thing, but she's not mean or rude, just a bit wary of others. That's how I try to write her at this point in the story anyways. This story is very much about her learning to open up and accept the family she's being welcomed into, and I want to make it a heartwarming counterpart to some of my other stories with less willing protagonists. This is sort of the best case scenario, the ideal process for a new citizen, in comparison to those who have to be shipped off to a re-education facility.

And as you'll see, we already have one of our first big changes from the original oneshot this is based on. There'll be more down the road~