A Hill of Beans - Voting Chapters 1 and 2
Added 2021-06-30 20:01:00 +0000 UTCHi, alright, by the end of July Hot Tub Love Machine should be finished and I'll want to get writing new series in August. This is the first potential series -
A Hill of Beans:
Richie Jackson is being ground down by the whims of his first ever girlfriend, Harper, an overweight girl, while all of the hotter and fitter girls in his life are claiming they'd take her place, when all of the sudden he gets offered a magic trade that's just to real to pass up. But if this makes him a bad boyfriend, wait until you see how he fucks up as a magic user.
Tags : Mind Control, Male Dominant, Harem, Comedy of Errors
A little more on the nose of a Jack and The Beanstalk inspired story than Blizzard as a Cinderella one.
I want Richie to be the kind of MC who might feel guilty about how things happened but not about the sex, magic, and harem.
I also want the story to go quite a bit faster than the last two, expect the harem to fill up quickly.
There are two chapters posted today. Link at the bottom of chapter one or go to chapter two here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CXwaM5gULsrCM5YXmnfQGWL4dNNbrSm4egdoZMZYXyI/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Some girls be sluts. And as slutty as I want Lilith to be, I doubt four times means eight different dudes.
Neal Johnstone
2021-07-06 06:34:28 +0000 UTCSome I can only find in singles, some come in four packs. I've never seen a three pack of tallboys before.
Neal Johnstone
2021-07-06 06:31:20 +0000 UTCFor chapter 2... that bit about Lillith being spit roasted four times eww... that is all
Nick Cartwright
2021-07-06 06:27:54 +0000 UTCI guess depending on the placement of where in the year the 2 were born it could work out with a three grade difference. Ps y’all got tallboy 4 packs in Canada? Shit we only 3 packs in the states (at least in California).
Nick Cartwright
2021-07-06 05:02:07 +0000 UTCGood point, there's some arithmetic in my head where it works, my brother and I are two years and change apart and our school grades worked out that way, but including a paragraph on the math to explain what kneejerk feels wrong at first glance is pointless when switching a cosmetic word is all I need.
Neal Johnstone
2021-07-06 04:20:53 +0000 UTCIsn’t he a freshman shouldn’t his sister be a junior if she’s 2 years older?
Nick Cartwright
2021-07-06 03:42:23 +0000 UTC
