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Hot Tub Love Machine - 11

Hi, if you're not up to date on HTLM, read the previous chapters here:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1GWUWRgDI1Zh7bnb4EJMgnRKvgdafJoRd?usp=sharing

If you haven't noticed, I have jumped back into Every Woman Has a Price, with an upload yesterday. I hope to have two more chapters of Price along with the four Monday updates this month.

Thank you all for the support!

Hot Tub Love Machine - 11

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Dawn is quickly becoming everyone's favorite. I totally get it, though I think that's screen time. I'm going to need to amp up Anna, Emi, and Ray. At least I have the afternoon date for Iggy... Mwahahaha! Um, sorry, something in my throat. Something EVIL! What? Oh, glad you liked the chapter!

Neal Johnstone

Cool update. Well as much as I’m curious about Ray. She is still pretty enigmatic. And I support Iggy. But somehow I’m team Dawn ever since the lemon slice before everyone came out. So colour me happy to see Dawn get some quality time with Lucas. A heart warming confession that Lucas was somehow oblivious to despite all knowing Emi being able to point out Dawn’s secret flirting habits. Naked sleepover in a twin bed for the win! I’m sure I’ll love the afternoon date with Iggy but this was amazing.

HardhatDoozer

Yeah, that does go Dawn, Emi, Emi, I'll clear it up when I get back later tonight.

Neal Johnstone

I like the whole plot Dawn is cooking up, and I have to say this story is among my favourite works of yours (Space Nut and Monkey Wrench are the main contenders, so I guess have some pretty clear preferences). Also seems I have to check out the Price folder again! Just for clarification, in the below excerpt, is the dialogue pattern Dawn-Emi-Emi (seems to make more sense based on what they're saying) or Dawn-Dawn cont.-Emi (what the formatting seems to suggest)? “Have fun, Em!” Dawn scooped up her phone, “If you’re having trouble with Lucas, I’m busy. Call Anna.” “Kisses!” Emi singsonged. Dawn hung up in the middle of the word.


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