Ring Toss - 9
Added 2020-11-30 21:01:00 +0000 UTCHey, November has been the first good writing month for me since lockdown started. I'm doing great, hope you're all doing great too!
If you are not up to date on Ring Toss, read the previous chapters here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1jaJyxh99feCWYyY77VtKuhsLtxzeMWLq?usp=sharing\
I hope to start adding the last chapters of Every Woman Has a Price throughout December and get chapter 12 of Small Town Goddesses up on New Year's Eve.
Everyone have a safe and happy holidays!
Comments
Interesting, Pat definitely isn't engaging it, and not seeing it in his wives. This gives me a bit to think about as I write this upcoming chapter. Thanks!
Neal Johnstone
2020-12-01 23:27:16 +0000 UTCStill weird that the characters aren't engaging with the premise of the story. In Hot Tub Love Machine it hasn't become blatant enough yet, but here, everyone's pretending that mind control/reality alteration didn't happen when it clearly did and it's kind of grating.
James Hârn
2020-12-01 22:42:53 +0000 UTCDamp is right, brainfart typo that I didn't hear the nuance of when I used my text-to-speech. Thanks for the heads up, changed it. Yeah, Deanne and Rosie have had the most screen time so they've had the most chance to fray. Thanks for mentioning Charlotte, showing should be more fun than telling. She kinda reminds me of a housecat, comes in for the pets and then goes away the moment she's satisfied. Happy to come back in the middle of whatever it is, kick everything off the table, just to get hers and bounce again.
Neal Johnstone
2020-12-01 04:05:56 +0000 UTC
