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Volume 1 - Page 53

While this section has remained fundamentally the same through the drafts, the actual specifics both of the action and dialogue have changed a lot. Action sequences are hard!

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TRANSCRIPT

Ava: Time to wrap this up! 

Ava: I might not be the fastest...

Ava: ...but good luck out-maneuvering a bat!

Raiona: Heh, I thought I was out here saving you. 

Raiona: Should've known you'd find a way out yourself.

Raiona: That's my Ava.

Ackerley: Ava-

Ava: I'm sorry, I know it was risky! I should have listened to you.

Raiona: Uh, guys... Let's not hang around...

Ava: Yeah, let's go.

Volume 1 - Page 53

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