mothorial

Volume 1 - page 18

Added 2021-05-16 23:06:52 +0000 UTC

Author's Note

It's really important to me that the dialogue in Mothorial flows as naturally as possible. This can be a challenge with space limitations, but it also presents a fun opportunity to learn how to balance effective dialogue with efficient storytelling. Some pages end up having as much as 25% to 30% of their dialogue cut and combined and tweaked to fit the space, then rewritten a third time to flow properly. Webcomics, amiright?

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TRANSCRIPT

AVA: ...Fine, I'll do it. But only 'cause you're a real friend. I don't know what Vex told you, but-

RAIONA: We were hanging out in a red flower field. Try checking there first. I'll see you 'round.

RAIONA: ...Alright, I did it. But I really don't feel good about this, guys.

CORI: She bought it, right?

RAIONA: Yeah, but-

CORI: It's just a prank, Rai. That jerk needs to learn her lesson. After this we'll leave her alone, okay?

RAIONA: Can't you let this go? It's not worth it.

VEX: Maybe not to you.