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FvT Definitive Edition Page 2

Here we go, the first true page of the definitive edition, with revised art and color, altered texts and new format for bubbles. If you have any critique or comment, let me know below, this is the moment where I can still go back and try different stuff before I get into altering the next 200 pages :P

Also, those pages are in png format, which I believe can prevent Patreon from lowering the quality, but let me know if this is not the case and I will attach a zip file instead.

FvT Definitive Edition Page 2 FvT Definitive Edition Page 2

Comments

It's as much work as a regular page I'd say, because I redo most of the lineart.

This looks incredible! I can't imagine how much extra work this will be, but I can safely say I'm excited for it :)

The Definitive edition is called like this because it's meant to be separate from the current version, not overwrite it, at least not until we're caught up to the ongoing pages. There will be new chapter division and new panels and maybe even entire new pages, so eventually the numbers will be way off by dozens. Think of it as a director's cut rather than just coloring old stuff.

I really like the improved artwork. The only thing that bothers me is the numbering, this used to be page 1 and keeping track of the numbers is going to be really confusing in the future, at least for me on my PC. I hope you reconsider about that.

No Way

You have to find the secret beaches.

Why is it they're not doing that on the beaches I've been to?

Beanzoboy

Sigh... So much Love on one beach.... I think I'm gonna cry...

Expect_no_Mercy

is working fine for me, and looks amazing, definitely shows the effort

Argenten

My, this is absolutely gorgeous !

Looks good! PNG seems to be doing the trick.

Andrew Pam


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