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Added 2016-12-02 04:16:28 +0000 UTCThe main event, so to speak!
*Edited the texts cause they were really crappy
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Lovely page, and I think "You go girls, cum on!" sounds a little better then "You go, girls come on"
Grip
2016-12-02 14:05:11 +0000 UTCthe twins are making an egg each, they will both get pregnant, if you find this confusing yeah I probably need to rewrite it. I was not sure how to phrase it in english to talk about them both without implying they each have two eggs and wombs.
2016-12-02 04:30:22 +0000 UTCZak's dialogue should read "So what happens now?" Also, I'm not sure if Pari is explaining it right, because right now I'm a bit confused myself. She says that they spent the last few weeks storing magic energy to grow a fairy egg in their womb. I'm not entirely sure what she means by "their" womb. There are two of them. They have two wombs. Didn't one of them store energy to grow the egg and the other one to make fairy plasma to fertilize it? Or are the twins making an egg each?
ArdenW
2016-12-02 04:28:05 +0000 UTC
