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Added 2015-09-06 06:42:35 +0000 UTCAaaand that's end of Chapter 1!
So there you go, Amy will get to leave the ship and look for Syl, but will also have to learn to live as a magic-less creature. As for the Queen, between her loneliness and quest of more power she'll struggle to keep her already fragile sanity, best of luck to her!
Some of you may think this is a rough ending for chapter 1, like, where's the funny bits with the silly faces? Good stories need drama, and I'm trying hard to make a good story among all the sexing, I hope you'll like it in the end!
So now, gotta get all those page finished before october, phew! I will try to update twice a week, which mean the next update could be monday or tuesday.
Thank you all for your support, the comic wouldn't have made it that far without you! we'll make chapter 2 more awesome!
Comments
Wow, the queen now has magic I do feel bad for the queen and who knows Amy's magic may not be all gone it could possibly be restored.
Grip
2015-09-07 17:16:51 +0000 UTCThe Queen leveled up
maninblack
2015-09-06 20:28:07 +0000 UTCAnd here we see the first Nihillak bricks. I actually pity the queen in a sense, at her core, she wants a family. At least some willing intimacy, you do a good job of putting real subplots and character development...in a tentacle sex comic. I salute you sah.
Argenten
2015-09-06 07:11:33 +0000 UTCShe still didn't get her fruits? Someone is in trouble.
2015-09-06 07:10:25 +0000 UTCAlright, I'll add that s on the final version, I always forget to conjugate at the third person >__<
2015-09-06 06:49:57 +0000 UTCI think you want her to say, "This warrants further investigation" instead of "warrant further investigation". You need the "s" at the end of "warrant". Also, I laughed at the "...and I still want fruits" bit.
ArdenW
2015-09-06 06:44:37 +0000 UTC
