114: Death Game (Also, Happy New Year!)
Added 2025-12-31 16:01:59 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks for the feedback and for reading so far! I think direction is definitely an issue I got with the story so far. And I'm trying my best to try and address that issue, but it's been challenging.
Not Evil Lemon
2026-01-02 05:15:02 +0000 UTCHappy new year author! +Love her character development + Love her dynamic with Mr.white in recent chapters - The anticipation of Ynett’s betrayal seems a bit delayed/dragged out, hope that’s addressed soon - We at this point know Chloe is either the daughter/the angel themself, and some mysteries we could see where it could probably go, so hope it also addressed soon as well (most plot point/mysteries literally starts hinting at the story first few chap, hope there’s new ones or just get rid of it and make explosive char development or new phase where she fight with determination or something)
Touch
2026-01-02 02:24:14 +0000 UTCThanks for reading, and happy new year!
Not Evil Lemon
2026-01-01 13:22:58 +0000 UTCHappy New Year
Macy Paulding
2025-12-31 22:15:24 +0000 UTCHappy New Years to you as well :D
Not Evil Lemon
2025-12-31 16:25:27 +0000 UTCHappy New Year, you Evilish Citron!
RektNut
2025-12-31 16:06:33 +0000 UTC
