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Added 2022-05-25 07:00:04 +0000 UTCWhew, she's alive, probably! ... For now!
Thanks to Logan (Finn), Marco (Jason), and Jonas (Jonas) for your patron cameos! And thanks to Elle Pierre for flatting!
Comments
Even there, it had to happen at or near the end.
Carl G Knoblock
2022-06-01 14:32:54 +0000 UTCShe'll survive. But she'll likely be unconscious for weeks.
Char89_Charizard
2022-05-25 19:09:53 +0000 UTCagreed to kill the lead protagonist in a story is no good(unless it's Romeo and Juliet ^^)
fox3379
2022-05-25 18:04:00 +0000 UTCDeath is a really good at making Tension but doesn't really work if it's a main character because of plot armor. You made it better by adding other character to make it less obvious
tacocat598
2022-05-25 09:08:59 +0000 UTC
