Naked Nightmare 21 - 22 (final)
Added 2025-08-17 10:00:05 +0000 UTCThis is a scheduled publish.
It sorta raises some questions as to how the "nightmare world" operates. Not to spoil or anything. Jon didn't technically die, he woke up at the last second. There are still consequences to injuries and such, but they're very "indirect".
Thanks for bearing with, let me know your questions, thoughts and feedback. I intend to have these on my amateur website, but I like to learn from every endeavor. I think "Jon's Dilemma" was actually alright as a starting point despite my doubt, but definitely showed some room for improvement as far as formatting goes. I'm more-so concerned about pacing and dialogue in this one.
There will more than likely be pages that precede and succeed the ones I have now.
While most of this is me and will remain my work as this is my passion project, I had some help from a long-time friend and would like to recognize it. Thanks, Pal.
Comments
Thank you so much :) this really means a lot!!!
CATJEWLZ
2025-08-28 05:02:31 +0000 UTCI just got around to reading this now, and I'm stunned at how good it was. This really feels like something I'd see in some obscure corner of the internet like 25 years ago. Great shading and panelling and composition, and great job making everything readable in monochrome.
Ashro
2025-08-28 00:26:03 +0000 UTCHow nice of him to send flowers after eating dinner with him, or eating him as dinner. Same thing.
Lluc Riberax
2025-08-17 11:44:08 +0000 UTC
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