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Tree of Life - Book 1 pg. 89.

Here's the finished page 89.

Hope you like it ^^

Tree of Life - Book 1 pg. 89.

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Team collaboration is at an all time low, <3 for Chili, she's got such an asset in her fire rage powers, she just needs help weaponizing them.... ASSet heh heh heh.

IvyReed

Me too, I love these characters <3 Awesome job, Zum ^^

Obsidian

I can't wait to reach points where the character's relationship will change with eachother ^^

Zummeng

I appreciate the small touch that as they've had nowhere to refresh she's still got traces of blood on her. Indicates they haven't stopped moving since fight. Chilli I think is morally in the right but can't see that practicality is unfortunately necessary. Leo was an ass but not without complete cause. Will be interesting to see what they do next and how Nigel etc fit into the journey.

Powerjugs

Yeah the other three need to step up real soon.

Kochi, Dignity Thief

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Rvw6gMfs0yk&pp=ygUhbW9ydGFsIGtvbWJhdCB0b2FzdHkgc291bmQgZWZmZWN0

Kochi, Dignity Thief

I really think there should be some skill sharing. I have a feeling that they're gonna be together for a while, so it might behoove them to pick up some other skills so that they can share the load more equitably. Also... the true reason Chili's upset. As previously stated, Leo is RIGHT but he's a massive dick about it. They don't have time to bury those people, they have to get where they're going. But leaving them like that feels super disrespectful.

pj wolf

Poor Chili. She is finally seeing the cruel world for what it is and realizing that its filled with incredibly blunt people like Nigel and Leo. I just hope that these feelings don't eat her up.

StumpedMoose

As a rule I try not to accuse women of mood swings. And putting Chili's opinions on spice aside, the rest of them should take a turn to cook or stop complaining.

The14th

Chilli is so precious, I'm so glad she finally got a hug <3

Obsidian

I guess you are right :) I'll fix it.

Zummeng

Also, shouldn't Mira's speech bubble be something like "You've been setting yourself on fire *a lot* lately" or something similar? Her sentence feels incomplete.

Myhairhasamindofitsown

Chili toasty butt counter: 2

AdmiredRain28

And that has always been kind of a problem with Chili. Her idealism always gets the best of her, and she doesn't process the reality of her stiuation. She's at war, techinically speaking, and she has a duty to fulfill. The best way to help no-one is to try and help everyone. Besides that, Leo and Nigel are assholes for the way in which they criticise Chilli, but as she points out, the only consistent thing she can do for the group is cooking and she cannot even fathom the concept of not everyone having the same palette as her. They've been traveling for several days now, learning to ease on the spice it's not difficult to do so. You cannot ask for cooperation but not be willing to compromise.

Myhairhasamindofitsown


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