Perfect Fit pg. 39.
Added 2021-08-02 16:49:29 +0000 UTCHere's the finished page 39.
I couldn't fit everything I wanted into the last panel, so I turned it to the side. I really like how it looks, and I should do more like this in the future, though I'm not completely confident with it :D
Enjoy :)
Comments
I suppose it makes sense that with Nora breaking through Chris' armor with her stubbornness, Chris breaks through Nora's armor with his perspective. The oldest profession isn't always filled with people who want to be there (and often seems like a bunch of people who don't want to be there do it). One wonders why Nora is doing that job.
pj wolf
2021-08-04 02:00:03 +0000 UTC❤️
Simone Spinozzi
2021-08-03 18:38:50 +0000 UTCShe is best girl 100%
Gabriel Thorne
2021-08-03 16:51:57 +0000 UTCThanks for the corrections, they will be fixed :) Proofreading however would be a bit difficult, because the text only gets its final form during the making of the page.
Zummeng
2021-08-03 08:44:39 +0000 UTCTAKE HER WITH YOU AAAAAA
Anony mouse
2021-08-02 23:49:48 +0000 UTCahh there it is, the part that makes me sad lmao
2021-08-02 22:52:46 +0000 UTCAlso came to point out typos, but someone beat me to it. Anyway, you've really made me attached to these characters! The top-notch writing and art in your comics are what made me become a patron!
Loshon
2021-08-02 20:39:43 +0000 UTCBut fitting everything into small spaces is the whole theme of the comic! Jokes aside, what you did looks great.
Frarf
2021-08-02 19:43:32 +0000 UTCI feel like that last panel would be very interesting if it were from Chris pov looking at her. still, I also really liked how it came out like this <3
ShinobiSparrow
2021-08-02 18:00:52 +0000 UTCSuch a cute scene.
Nick R. Kupila
2021-08-02 17:46:22 +0000 UTCThank you
June
2021-08-02 17:06:51 +0000 UTCEither Christopher knew Nora isn't happy with her job and how her life lead to this, or he's too pessimistic to look at the brighter aspects of life compared to Nora. I'll go with the former since the center panel showed possibly a crack to Nora's act. Considering she can't have kids, being watched by a merciless boss, and have to go to bad alleys teeming with gangs, Nora may have hide her sadness with a smile hence the lies that Chris stated.
AdmiredRain28
2021-08-02 17:00:28 +0000 UTCArt wise and story wise this is a beautiful page. Text wise I see two typos: lie should be lies and effects should be effect. Should you ever be considering the services of a proofreader, I'd be happy to oblige.
Rob D.
2021-08-02 16:55:11 +0000 UTC
