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Tree of Life - Book 0 pg. 69.

Here's the finished page 69. I know, I know, not as lewd as a 69th page should be... XP And it might have been a lot more graceful and magical if Alex would emerge from the water, and not just sit on the shore... But maybe next time.

Tree of Life - Book 0 pg. 69.

Comments

:( Daww don't be so hard on yourself Gloria :(

GML94

Well, I think Alexander must behave like a gentleman. The first date: meeting, some compliments, little small talk, warm smile before goodbye. The second date: bouquet of flowers, cup of mead in tavern, long walk under the stars, kiss on the lips before goodbye. The third date: big bouquet of flowers, light dinner at Gloria's home, incredibly long hot sex at night. As a result - Lily!))

Alexey Belovolsky

...So Alexander is a dork? Rad.

pj wolf

Already we've got a much different Alex.

The14th

Poor, dejected Gloria. She doesn't deserve to be that down. But i'm confident it can't last!

Gabriele

Page 69 πŸ˜‚ it was meant to be.

MikeB

gloria

Simone Spinozzi

❀️

Simone Spinozzi

I didn't know, she was that pessimist. But loneliness can tear you pieces, pretty soon. I feel bad for her. :(

3DMM0r

Noooooooooo Gloriaaa TT^TT

TrashD

In hindsight. The old comic can be seen as "this is how Alex things their first meeting went" and "this is what actually happened".

Nick R. Kupila

You say that but he already had his erotic rise from the water as if he was a show-y-er Poseidon. Now Alex is far more developed as a character and we can appreciate a more timid and believable entrance.

Nick R. Kupila

Gonna throw a stone in the water. Best Goat Mom: Gloria or Toriel? (Oh, yeah. I went there.)

Wild Space Saga

;w;

Viro Veteruscy

Oh, that's a perfect idea! XD

Zummeng

I just hate seeing Gloria so miserable and lonely, but I know that Alex will gain the courage to finally talk to her that'll eventually blossom into a lasting relationship.

Mr_TTerevel

I want to give her a big hug

Iselwyr

Gah, I just wanna give Gloria a hug

Already love this even more than the original run, so fricken wholesome right off the bat!

Bepis Le Snolf

The erotic comic was their wet fantasy they dreamed of. And now this is the reality, the awkward cruel reality.

Pik

Thank you

June

He is my favorite and most awkward fish dad. Meanwhile she is the saddest goat mom. : C

IvyReed

So this is the new beginning of Alexander and Gloria? I'm excited to see how it goes.

Austin Judes

I Like having Alexander being nervous to meet Gloria. Very different to the erotica, can't wait for them to finally meet

AdmiredRain28

This one started out different then the Gift from the Water God comic. Alexander seems less confident then he was.

DiDiDi-X


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