Tree of Life - Book 0 pg. 69.
Added 2021-07-01 15:50:09 +0000 UTCHere's the finished page 69. I know, I know, not as lewd as a 69th page should be... XP And it might have been a lot more graceful and magical if Alex would emerge from the water, and not just sit on the shore... But maybe next time.
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:( Daww don't be so hard on yourself Gloria :(
GML94
2021-07-03 14:12:12 +0000 UTCWell, I think Alexander must behave like a gentleman. The first date: meeting, some compliments, little small talk, warm smile before goodbye. The second date: bouquet of flowers, cup of mead in tavern, long walk under the stars, kiss on the lips before goodbye. The third date: big bouquet of flowers, light dinner at Gloria's home, incredibly long hot sex at night. As a result - Lily!))
Alexey Belovolsky
2021-07-02 12:55:32 +0000 UTC...So Alexander is a dork? Rad.
pj wolf
2021-07-02 10:25:07 +0000 UTCAlready we've got a much different Alex.
The14th
2021-07-01 23:55:35 +0000 UTCPoor, dejected Gloria. She doesn't deserve to be that down. But i'm confident it can't last!
Gabriele
2021-07-01 20:56:47 +0000 UTCPage 69 π it was meant to be.
MikeB
2021-07-01 20:43:27 +0000 UTCgloria
Simone Spinozzi
2021-07-01 19:55:44 +0000 UTCβ€οΈ
Simone Spinozzi
2021-07-01 19:55:38 +0000 UTCI didn't know, she was that pessimist. But loneliness can tear you pieces, pretty soon. I feel bad for her. :(
3DMM0r
2021-07-01 19:55:28 +0000 UTCNoooooooooo Gloriaaa TT^TT
TrashD
2021-07-01 19:53:21 +0000 UTCIn hindsight. The old comic can be seen as "this is how Alex things their first meeting went" and "this is what actually happened".
Nick R. Kupila
2021-07-01 19:20:49 +0000 UTCYou say that but he already had his erotic rise from the water as if he was a show-y-er Poseidon. Now Alex is far more developed as a character and we can appreciate a more timid and believable entrance.
Nick R. Kupila
2021-07-01 19:19:33 +0000 UTCGonna throw a stone in the water. Best Goat Mom: Gloria or Toriel? (Oh, yeah. I went there.)
Wild Space Saga
2021-07-01 18:12:03 +0000 UTC;w;
Viro Veteruscy
2021-07-01 18:04:14 +0000 UTCOh, that's a perfect idea! XD
Zummeng
2021-07-01 16:54:45 +0000 UTCI just hate seeing Gloria so miserable and lonely, but I know that Alex will gain the courage to finally talk to her that'll eventually blossom into a lasting relationship.
Mr_TTerevel
2021-07-01 16:47:57 +0000 UTCI want to give her a big hug
Iselwyr
2021-07-01 16:40:38 +0000 UTCGah, I just wanna give Gloria a hug
2021-07-01 16:36:44 +0000 UTCAlready love this even more than the original run, so fricken wholesome right off the bat!
Bepis Le Snolf
2021-07-01 16:35:05 +0000 UTCThe erotic comic was their wet fantasy they dreamed of. And now this is the reality, the awkward cruel reality.
Pik
2021-07-01 16:28:48 +0000 UTCThank you
June
2021-07-01 16:14:36 +0000 UTCHe is my favorite and most awkward fish dad. Meanwhile she is the saddest goat mom. : C
IvyReed
2021-07-01 15:56:40 +0000 UTCSo this is the new beginning of Alexander and Gloria? I'm excited to see how it goes.
Austin Judes
2021-07-01 15:54:00 +0000 UTCI Like having Alexander being nervous to meet Gloria. Very different to the erotica, can't wait for them to finally meet
AdmiredRain28
2021-07-01 15:53:18 +0000 UTCThis one started out different then the Gift from the Water God comic. Alexander seems less confident then he was.
DiDiDi-X
2021-07-01 15:53:00 +0000 UTC
