Tree of Life pg. 40.
Added 2020-11-19 18:12:34 +0000 UTCHere's the finished page 40.
This page marks the end of this story chapter. And it didn't end as most of you expected I suppose. Tristan couldn't do what the Tree of Life encouraged him. Everyone has to make their own decisions, and sadly Luna couldn't do it for him. She did open Tristan's eyes, but he was too weak to break out of the prison of pressure. He did live his whole life in there after all. But I'm sure it's not a big spoiler if I say we'll meet Tristan again soon enough :)
Next week a new prologue starts, and I hope you are just as excited about it as I am :D We are progressing quite nicely with the prologues. But there are still a few characters left to meet and get to know ;)
Comments
As I said before: GOD DAMMIT Tristan...
Dahtii
2020-11-19 22:23:53 +0000 UTCAlthough the little sprout failed to assert himself this time, the seed has been planted and won't go away any time soon. Those words will always stick with him (I hope). A little age, some stronger roots, and the little sprout might one day be strong enough to stand up to the winds of manipulation on his own.
DC_OZ
2020-11-19 20:39:53 +0000 UTCDamn... figured it wasn't gonna be that easy but still good to see the first attempt. Likely won't pick up till a great amount of time and experience to figure himself out. He's still young. Good start :3
Viro Veteruscy
2020-11-19 19:58:43 +0000 UTCI think it is a testament to your abilities that we want good things for Tristan, I am not disappointed in this outcome because it reinforces and actualizes Tristan as a gentle sweet boy; and it'd be jarringly saccharine for him to get "the happy ending" so quickly.
IvyReed
2020-11-19 19:10:08 +0000 UTCIt might work out in the end. He'll learn some skills that thieves are taught and hopefully he try to rob someone and get caught only to be taught good with his skills.
Technoking77
2020-11-19 18:57:18 +0000 UTCI like when comic artists are willing to portray their characters like this. Its a heart ache for the reader but makes sense towards how the characters themselves make decisions about the situations around them. Cant wait to see everyone else make their comic debut!
Boxer Briefs
2020-11-19 18:17:33 +0000 UTCToxic relationships win this round. But there will be more to come.
Parker Trotter
2020-11-19 18:17:05 +0000 UTCWell I was very worried that the other thieves would do something bad to Tristan's chicken(?) family as revenge, so... This is good?
Felicity Longis
2020-11-19 18:16:37 +0000 UTC
