大変お待たせしました! セリフや擬音の追加差分です! 前回からの反省点をふまえ色々成長を見せられたと思います! skebで依頼してくれた方、有難うございました!! この投稿は来月イラストを投稿した時、この投稿は非公開にします。 Thank you very much for your patience! Here are the additional differences in dialogue and onomatopoeia! I think I was able to show a lot of growth based on what I have learned from the previous version! Thank you to those who requested it on skeb! I will keep this post private when I submit an illustration next month.