drugsandwires

Chapter 4 Page 13

Added 2017-07-23 00:38:17 +0000 UTC

Here's a slightly earlier page for you guys!

I kind of messed up the upper panel by drawing Eve on the right even though she spoke first, so in the end I had to cross over the speech bubbles which I think is a no-no in comics. (then again, there's also a rule about keeping characters on their respective sides, which has an official name I can't for the life of me remember right now. You just can't win.)

This page and the next ones have gone through about 3452 re-writes just in the past few weeks thanks to me being a pain. In the original version Dan was more than willing to list every single substance he's done in Eve's absence for comedic effect, but that felt a little out of character to me. Dan and Eve's relationship was in part ruined by Dan lying and hiding his use, so I wanted to keep that theme going. (especially since he's already hiding the true reason he quit VR). I think it shows off their dynamic nicely.

..I'm realising I'm stealing Io's commentary material here, so I'm gonna stop.