RDR2 comic (completed)
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And your Arthur reminds me of sexy Clint Eastwood. π€€
2020-09-23 03:04:16 +0000 UTCThis is sooooo gorgeous, ahhh!! ππ I looove this so much and I wish youβd make a full story about this. π₯° I feel like thereβs a continuation and John will discover what Arthur really thinks about him... That heβs precious to him, hihihi. π
2020-09-23 03:02:05 +0000 UTCThis is so beautiful!
Brookie
2020-09-11 20:05:36 +0000 UTCyou could lose the word βdoβ in the journal so it says βjohn looksβ instead. this is really beautiful. i love the way you coloured it π₯Ί
toxotesCrotus
2020-09-11 15:54:48 +0000 UTCAnd now i'm in love both woth John and the ship. Love the short comic
2020-09-11 14:09:31 +0000 UTCThis is awesome! But also adding onto Marija, you could just get rid of "as" so like "I feel he is precious to me" either works πππ
2020-09-11 13:41:55 +0000 UTCAgreed, this comic is so good!
2020-09-11 13:40:34 +0000 UTCThanks!!
Sayuri527
2020-09-11 13:33:14 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Sayuri527
2020-09-11 13:32:59 +0000 UTCI think it also sounds a bit more natural to add "I feel as if he is precious to me" -- adding "if"
Exquisite Moonlets
2020-09-11 13:31:41 +0000 UTCInstead of "do feel" it's should be "does feel" This comic is so cute I love it!
Juzu
2020-09-11 13:26:29 +0000 UTC
