Rewrite
Added 2023-09-24 16:49:57 +0000 UTCSo I posted When The Cat Becomes The Mouse for VIP.My plan was to finish Worst Enemy and edit them one after the other.The problem is I hate what I wrote for Worst Enemy.Bella was not as angry I wanted to portray her and Edward was barely brought up.Not only does Bella deserve better than what I wrote but the Cullens deserve worse.That being said I am going to rewrite it.Not to worry though I’m starting right now and will post it by the end of the day.I explained to my sister the situation and she is allowing me to skip family bonding time to focus on it.So look out for a chapter of Worst Enemy by the end of the day and as always thanks for the support and keep the comments coming.
Comments
Also- Tell your Sister and her Wife, we thank them for their understanding. Thank you for your support (said like the old Bartles and James Commercial's)
M60476zeus
2023-09-25 13:05:18 +0000 UTCJust make it right. Bella’s anger should be seen and felt, by ALL parties involved
M60476zeus
2023-09-24 19:25:20 +0000 UTCAbsolutely I agree, Bella deserves more. Each Cullen deserves Bella's wrath. Rosalie and Edward deserve the worst of it. I look forward to that one. Back to football Sunday tho 👌🏾.
JusTay
2023-09-24 16:59:00 +0000 UTC
